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That's a real compliment. I don't know, I liked how this came out, for the most part, but I couldn't tell you how Rose would play in the rest of it.

Yeah, the choice was something that grew on me after I posted. It actually was a good place to end it since I was rather stuck.

As for Smith falling for her...I think that would have been so hard on Rose. And imagine if she fell in love with him? How could she lose John to gain the Doctor? That would be rough, no?

Thanks for pointing out the typo. I've gone over this so many times and still find stuff.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment; it's appreciated!