ilia ([personal profile] ilia) wrote2009-03-20 02:01 am

Temptation [SPN]

Title/Prompt: Temptation
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters/Pairing: Dean Winchester/Castiel
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 330~
Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] sacred_20. I'm still surprised and this is still unbetaed.
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Dean’s hands were itchy, his fingers twitched. He clenched his hands into fists and stuffed them in his jacket.

Sam was giving him sidelong looks with his pissy face, clearly asking what the hell his problem was and why the hell was he acting like a total spaz in front of the angel?

Dean had the urge to stick his tongue out and say that Castiel was his angel and he could damn well ignore him if he wanted to.

“Do you understand?”

“Yeah, Cas. Got it. Going. Bye,” Dean waved quickly, wanted Castiel gone before he did something stupid like give into his fucking crazy urges. And usually having Sam there would be enough, but this time it wasn’t

“You have not been listening,” Castiel said, his words heavy with frustration--much worse than accusation.

Dean’s eyes had been awesome and well-behaved before this, completely focused elsewhere, anywhere besides Castiel’s extreme blue eyes, but now Dean couldn’t not meet them, it was like they were freaking magnetized or something.

The problem was that it didn’t help. At all. It made things worse. Dean always did and said stupid shit because of what he felt under that gaze.

He gave up. It was futile. “Fuck it,” Dean muttered as he ate up the meager distance between them.

His hands came up to Castiel's throat. Ignoring the heat emanating from the angel, his electric stare, Dean undid the messy, twisted tie. His hand around a vulnerable neck, brushing against a sensitive nape, the silken feel of hair, crossing and looping--ignoring the muscles so close to his touch, the sensation of eyes on his face, on his lips--tightening cheap material into a knot and smoothing it down once, twice, before realizing what he was doing--groping--and stepping away quickly.

“It was bugging me.” He shrugged and didn’t meet anyone’s eyes. “Seal in Cleveland, got it,” he said as he moved away towards the Impala.

He ignored the itch of someone staring too intently. He was good at that, at least.

[identity profile] olympia-m.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
awwww!!!! that was utterly cute :)
(and so refreshing after last nights's ep// *happy sigh*)
ext_131: (dancin')

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
Well, as cute as SPN allows me without being totally OOC. *sheepish*

Sam is going to tease the hell outta Dean. No bad!Sam here! No, siree!

I'm glad it helped a little bit!

[identity profile] guardianangel-x.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
HEHEHE, oh my goodness! See, I have secretly been waiting for Dean to do something about that damn tie! And LOOK what you gave me! *BOWS* You're so much WIN right now, no lie.
And yea, last night's ep was all doom and gloom ((but not without it's AWESOME share of Dean/Cas tension!)) and I was all waah, Dean. This... This made it all betta' ;D

AND...AND I CHALLENGE YOU! I challenge you to write another story about poor Cas not understanding why his tie wasn't right before that or something.. and asking Dean...or something. ...please. LOL

[identity profile] choreograph999.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Seconding this challege!!! And thirding it too!
ext_131: (perfect ten)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Then I will consider it seriously!

Thanks!
ext_131: (bastardangel)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! You'd make me blush if I had any shame at all. (It was awesome, I agree, but damn the woobieness made my heart hurt. I wanted to smish the boys and ply them with cookies and milk.)

I'm really glad this helped.

...I will take your challenge into consideration. Cas is much harder to write.

Thanks!

[identity profile] guardianangel-x.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, pssh, shame? Who needs shame! LOL, soak up the praise!!!!!

And I KNOW!!!!! You just wanted to wrap them up in a blanket or something *sigh*

And you make me smile! You say he's harder to write, but you know what? I know you can do it ;D Cause you're awesome, lol.

[identity profile] kira-bouviea.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Awsome!

We need more.

Please.
ext_131: (Camshaft)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Ack! I suppose this is what I get for being unable to write whumpy angsty stuff 24/7, writing fluff in comparison.

I will consider more, especially if a bunny bites.

Thanks.

[identity profile] darksilvercat.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Tee-hee! Love love love the idea of Dean fixing Castiel's tie!
ext_131: (reikai tantei)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
It's so cute, right?

Hee!

And I got your fic, btw. Will get it back to you soon!

[identity profile] kaje-less.livejournal.com 2009-03-20 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, sweet! Totally loved the attention to physical detail while redoing the tie.
ext_131: (D)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked that bit, it was basically what I wrote the whole things around.

temptation

[identity profile] laceymcbain.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome! I love it. Nice twist to this - and palpable heat, considering.
ext_131: (chibi castiel)

Re: temptation

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, with the prompt, I wanted a little misdirection and I know I can't write hot, sexy scenes as well as other people...so, voila.

Thanks! ^_^

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha! Great job!
ext_131: (Fabulous House)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you!

[identity profile] rasah.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
that's adorable! and such a nice antidote to last night's uber-tragic episode :o)
ext_131: (Genius in the room.)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I figure there will be enough angsty and/or touching tags to the ep. so I tried something a little different. Which worked out well. Gives people a break from the apocalypse. ;)

[identity profile] debris_k.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Funny, that's what my hands are itching to do to Castiel too... fix his tie, I mean. ... What else could I have meant? *cough*

Cute and sweet! ;-D
ext_131: (sparkle 10/rose)

[identity profile] ladyyueh.livejournal.com 2009-03-21 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
What else could I have meant?

Uh-huh. You know Dean is the only one allowed to *cough* fix Castiel's tie.

Apparently, I didn't know I had been concerned about the tie until it occurred to me to write this...what is it about men with ties and messy hair? And their blond/e humans? *sigh*

Thank you!
Edited 2009-03-21 23:01 (UTC)